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The Novelist’s Boot Camp – Part I

The Novelist’s Boot Camp – Part I

Middle scenes (beginning and the end of the middle)

This weekend has been totally awesome!   I attended a Novelist’s Boot Camp with Kim Wilkins at the Queensland Writers Centre. I’m going to break this post into two parts as if this is something you might be interested in attending, I don’t want it to be too long.  I’d hate you to lose interest because this boot camp is just too damn good to not be talked about.  It was Intense. We started on Friday evening, finishing Sunday evening.  We were in lock down at Boggo Road Gaol!  Nah – I’m kidding, if only! How cool would that have been?  We all certainly thought it was a great idea :)

Personally, I respond well to boot camps when it comes to writing.  I survived Clarion South 2007  and loved it.  You can read about my experience here  One of my Clarion stories ‘Seduced by Colour’ has just won second prize in a US writing competition :) and another ‘Sacred Fire’ won two Honorable Mentions with two US writing publishing houses.  In 2010, I embarked on an intense workshop in playwriting with Alex Broun  The play I wrote that weekend ‘The Corpse cannot Play’ went from a ‘Wildcard’ performance to being in the top ten Gala/Final night at the Judith Wright Centre.  You can read about my experience with the Short + Sweet Theatre here.

So who knows what might come out of this weekend, a published novel perhaps?  Wouldn’t that be bliss.

This weekend was a total buzz as we planned and conceptualised our novels and found ways through our individual barriers.  We were all in the plotting stage of the novel and at varying degrees of how much had been written, but we all had one thing in common: we were all at the stage where we needed intervention.  Kim Wilkins to the rescue! Dr Kim is not only a brilliant teacher, she is passionate about writing which comes from the heart and touches everyone in the room. Her ability to share knowledge in a way that feels real, believable and doable is astonishing.  She always finds a way to connect with each and every individual where you leave the class getting it and not scratching your head going: WHAT THE…

Dr Kim shares practical techniques to get us back in touch, back in love with our stories, and by planning which enables us to work through the middle and move into the home run with an excited and unstoppable passion to get to the end.

World building (shocking example of my world) cannot draw to save myself)

From my experience, writing the beginning and the ending is reasonably easy, but writing the middle can be really tough.  Just what do you put in the middle to keep the reader engaged while you move the story forward to its ultimate conclusion?  Kim  showed us how to break this down into bite size and manageable chunks and of course planning and writing in chronological order.  This doesn’t work for everyone – but whether you prefer this method of writing a book or not – it certainly is a guaranteed method of finishing a book.  I know from first-hand experience with my own resistance to this method, all those moons ago, that this is the only way I managed to get to the finish line with my last two books.  (My unfinished novel still sits in the bottom drawer).

Finishing the first one may have been a fluke, but the second one I know I finished because I had a plan.  I’m not suggesting great books aren’t written organically because I know they are, but I am suggesting that this is a guaranteed method of getting to the end quickly.

So if I’ve finished two books already why did I need to attend a novelist’s boot camp?

You can find the answer to this question in ‘The Novelist’s Boot Camp – Part II’ – Monday 6th February, 2012.

Kudos to Meg Vann for adding value to the class with her knowledge and expertise particularly in the crime genre and to the Queensland Writers Centre for putting such a great course together.

Midnight rambler has mapped out the middle scenes and made major headway on the world building :)

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Worlds + conventions + writers + bar + alcohol = good times and dancing magickal faeries armed with pixie dust…

Worlds + conventions + writers + bar + alcohol = good times and dancing magickal faeries armed with pixie dust…

Having just got back from AussieCon 4 (the 68th World Science Fiction Convention) held at the MCEC in Melbourne, I think it is fair to say I had a blast along with my fellow comrades from Writers on the Edge, Ladies Wot Write, and the graduates of Clarion South pre and post 2007. For the most part, most of them were present (even one from as far as the US) but perhaps not all at the one time.

Sean Williams, mentor, buddy and just the best guy ever and (oh, a brilliant writer) was unable to make it due to being seriously ill. He was missed big time by soooo’ many people! And I know how disappointed he was to have missed it.

I attended both the Ditmars and the Hugos and was honoured to be amongst so many talented writers. Many of the nominated were my writing buddies, mentors and peers and quite a few of them brought home awards. YAY!

My writing buddies from LWW - Moi with Jane Domagala, Rebecca Livesey and Sharon Phillips ~ Photo: Jane Domagala

The Ditmar winners can be found here

The Hugo Winners can be found here

 

I made a promise to myself to travel light and buy no books! Is that a dumb idea or what? Of course I had to buy books…but space was limited so I only managed five which considering my severe lack of space in my bag, that was a pretty good effort. I have had to order the rest I wanted online.

 

 

The thing with World Con (which was brilliant by the way) is that it was so spread out. There were so many people (new friends and old) that I was hankering to hang out with, but it just wasn’t always possible. Most times it was snatches of hugs, conversation and waving from the distance – still brilliant either way.

Fellow Edgers: Nea Beauville, Deb Soukup and Chris McMahon ~ Photo: Jason Nahrung

Fellow Clarionite, Ben Francisco and Moi ~ Photo: Jane Domagala

For as many panels, book signings, book launches and readings that I attended there was equally, if not more, I missed. If I could have split myself into several pieces, I would have seen and done a lot more. But alas, there is only one of me.

Moi with the lovely, Jane Domagala ~ Photo: Jane Domagala

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was quite fun getting kicked out of the bar at 2am on more than one occasion or not depending on how you look at it. But those of us who were kicked out (you know who you are) would all agree that it was fun :)

Rob Shearman reading his delightful story 'One Last Love Song' ~ Photo: Jason Nahrung

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh, and I lied – there were no dancing magickal faeries except for the really drunk one dancing on the bar (ahem, you know who you are) :)

The five days rolled around all too quickly – then depart Melbourne for BrisVegas:

  • Home for one day – quick changeover of clothes and off again…
  • Join me next post for Writers on the Edge annual retreat…

 

Midnight rambler off ‘into the wild’

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